The feedback I received in the crit was kind of helpful but not as much as I'd hoped. I am glad that everyone liked the idea but I was hoping that I would get some suggestions on how I could take this idea down an almost brand new path.
I did try smudging the design a bit more but it became a little bit too obvious for my liking. I want there to be a bit of mystery or discovery behind the design. I want the viewer to maybe not notice it straight away, but once they do it becomes very clear.
I did play around with the size of the design but I kept it rather small because I feel it makes it look more lonely and fragile, which links to the narrator of the song.
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