During this crit some people said that they thought a smaller sized leaflet would work better but most said that the A6 size worked really well.
This also goes for the orange and grey colour scheme. Everyone liked it and had no problems with it.
One of the main difficulties in this brief was deciding what to put on the back of the leaflet. One person said that if it was just left blank that it would still look good and maybe just white space would contrast well against the busy primary orange colour.
A very helpful piece of feedback that was given was that the justified text didn't work very well as there wasn't enough writing and it created big gaps between words. This is something that I have done wrong before in first year that I obviously need to recognise and learn from.
One person thought the layout of the titles didn't work very well but Jon and others in the crit argued that it works fine and isn't a problem.
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