OUGD406 Studio Brief 3 | Interim Crit Feedback & Alterations

 Overall Simon could see how our concept worked but said it was too futuristc and sci-fi like. He said the logo was too complicated and wouldn;t work on a small scale and it was too complex, but it wored well on the larger things such as the fron of the booklet and the posters Lo designed.

Simon also liked the idea of focusing on the rectangular shape of an A4 piece of paper, and said it's something to stick to as the front of the booklet looked 'striking'.













Some more feedback I got was it was either show everyone's work, or nobody's.

Another thing that changed in our brand was the colour scheme, the blue only added to the sci-fi look.








-Logo is too complex
-Brand is too futuristic
-Change the blue
-Change elements of the booklet